UCLA Anderson MBA Essays for Fall 2013 Admission
Dec, 02, 2012
Categories: Admissions Consulting | Essays | UCLA
In what follows, I will analyze the UCLA Anderson School of Management’s MBA Essays for Fall 2013 Admission. If you want to enter the Class of 2015, you will encounter a really easy set of essays to answer.
THIS A VERY EASY ESSAY SET, IF YOU ARE AT ALL INTERESTED IN UCLA, APPLY!
Assuming you are working on other schools, this one should not take particularly long. Especially if you are applying to HBS, Booth, Kellogg, Columbia, or Stanford, this one should be particularly easy to do. In the previous two years, UCLA had a video/audio presentation as part of the application, but they have now dropped it. So much for innovative approaches to the MBA admissions process!
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I have taken the questions and instructions from UCLA’s website:
What is your proudest achievement outside the workplace, and how has it impacted you? (700 words maximum)
Please see my analysis of INSEAD 2, HBS 1, Booth Essay 3, Kellogg Essays 1 and 2, Columbia Essay 2, Stanford 3, and possibly Stanford 1 (You can find the links in my Key Posts). Depending on the topic you write about it, it is indeed possible that you will already be using it with the aforementioned schools. I make this point because I have already seen in the first round how it is possible to repurpose content between UCLA and these other school’s essays. Even if you UCLA is the first set of essays you are working on, if you are applying more widely it does help to consider how you will repurpose your UCLA content subsequently. I don’t believe in reinventing the wheel. If you have a great topic that can be made to work effectively for multiple schools, use it. Don’t shoehorn a round peg into a square hole, but honestly with this year’s essay sets, there are lots of round pegs and round holes.
- Your achievement should not professional. It may implications for you professionally, but the core study should be professional.
- Your achievement may involve academics, volunteer activities, hobbies, community engagement, personal matters. The possibilities are quite endless, just as long as the achievement is not work related.
Student life at Anderson is exceptional, highlighted by:
- Values: The values of UCLA Anderson set it apart from other schools. By working with professors and administrators, students forge a community that values learning, teamwork and research-based practical knowledge
- Collegiality: The hallmarks of student life at Anderson are compassion, mutual respect and support, which students demonstrate toward one another. The UCLA Anderson community is built on the collective strengths of our diverse student body.
- Access: The network of personal relationships and industry contacts that students develop while attending UCLA Anderson and after they graduate is arguably as important as the academic degree they earn. Countless opportunities exist for students to connect with individuals, business and community outside the classroom, and for alumni to stay in touch with the school, faculty, fellow alumni and current students.
I mention all of the above because I think it is quite helpful in understanding what UCLA is looking for: Highly collaborative, community-oriented high EQ individuals, who are great at networking, and are willing to push themselves to seek new challenges. Your achievement may or may not necessarily relate to those characteristics, but if your essay topic neither shows your potential or your ability to contribute, it is not likely to make for an effective topic.
What are your short-term and long-term career goals, and how will an MBA from UCLA Anderson specifically help you achieve these goals? (700 words maximum)
Rather than repeat much of what I have previously written about other versions of this question, I would suggest that you look at my analysis of Columbia 1 as it can be applied here.
A great Essay 2 will clearly answer the “Why now” aspect of the question without focusing too much on past experience. One core focus of this essay should be on how being a part of Anderson’s Class of 2014, will contribute to your intended professional future. Make sure that your motivations for pursuing that future are clearly stated in this essay and perhaps explained further elsewhere in your essay set.
UCLA puts great emphasis on applicants demonstrating that they have become informed about The Anderson School, so I strongly suggest that you visit if you can, but at least attend one of their admissions events. Getting in contact with UCLA alumni would also be helpful. At a minimum, learn as much as you can from their web page. You really need to convince adcom that you know what you need from UCLA for your future goals. If you have the word count do so, you may also want to address what you can contribute. The Anderson School is also very focused on entrepreneurship. If you are at all interested in entrepreneurship, pay special attention to the Harold and Pauline Price Center for Entrepreneurial Studies web page.
Japanese applicants should most certainly take a look at The Japan America Business Association (JABA) page. In addition, please see LA State of Mind ~UCLA MBA留学記 2009-2011~. You can find my Q&As with UCLA students on my Key Posts page.
THE OPTIONAL QUESTION
1. Are there any extenuating circumstances in your profile about which the Admissions Committee should be aware? (250 words)
This is a nice open-ended version of the standard “anything negative” optional essay. If everything is good, you don’t need to write this one. If it is not, I suggest doing so. As with other school’s optional questions, do not put an obvious essay for another school here, but you can certainly write on something positive here if you think its omission will be negative for you, but before you do, ask yourself these questions:
1. If they did not ask it, do they really need to know it?
2. Will the topic I want to discuss significantly improve my overall essay set?
3. Is the topic one that would not be covered from looking at other parts of my application?
4. Is the essay likely to be read as being a specific answer for UCLA and not an obvious essay for another school?
If you can answer “Yes!” to all four questions, it might be a good topic to write about.
RE-APPLICANTS – ONE REQUIRED ESSAY:
Reapplicants who applied for the class entering in fall 2011 or 2012 are required to complete the following essay:
- Please describe your career progress since you last applied and ways in which you have enhanced your candidacy. Include updates on short-term and long-term career goals, as well as your continued interest in UCLA Anderson. (700 words maximum)
If you are a reapplicant to UCLA, I hope that you have taken the time to learn more about it and can really explain why you fit there. In my analysis of Essays 1 and 2 above, please review the Anderson-specific comments I made. The whole point of reapplication is to give Anderson another chance to love you. Reapplicants should see my reapplication guide. Use this space to specifically explain what has improved about you since you last applied. You can certainly mention improved test scores, but I would not use very much of your word count for that. Typical topics include: development of a new skill, promotions that demonstrate your potential for future success, involvement in an extracurricular activity, learning significantly more about Haas, and why your goals now are better than the ones you presented last time. They want to see career growth or at least personal growth. Help them want to give you a chance.